A grade 9 answer to a GCSE question about Mr Birling
Here is what some would consider a grade 9 answer to a real question in a past AQA GCSE English literature paper regarding Mr Birling, one of the key characters of ‘An Inspector Calls’.
Here is the question:
“How does Priestley use Mr Birling to explore attitudes towards women in ‘An Inspector Calls’.
Write about:
how Mr Birling is presented during the play.
what some of these attitudes towards women are”
It is a 30 mark question and here is an example of what some would consider a grade 9 answer (remember there is always an element of subjectivity about this however).
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In ‘An Inspector Calls,’ Priestley uses Mr. Birling to explore attitudes towards women in various ways. Firstly, Mr. Birling is presented as a traditional, patriarchal figure who holds outdated views on gender roles. For instance, when discussing the engagement of his daughter Sheila to Gerald, he emphasizes the importance of maintaining social status and wealth rather than considering Sheila’s feelings or agency. He says, “A man has to make his own way—has to look after himself—and his family too, of course” (Act 1).
Furthermore, Mr. Birling’s treatment of Eva Smith reflects his dismissive attitude towards women. He sees her solely as cheap labour, without considering her as a human being with rights and dignity. When confronted about her dismissal from his factory, he brushes it off, saying, “It’s a free country, I told them” (Act 1). This reveals his lack of empathy and accountability towards women in lower social positions.
Moreover, Mr. Birling’s reaction to the Inspector’s revelations about Eva’s suicide exposes his selfish and callous nature. He shows more concern about protecting his reputation and avoiding scandal than reflecting on the impact of his actions on Eva’s life. He exclaims, “You’ve turned the whole story upside down. I protest against the way these things are done” (Act 3), demonstrating his refusal to take responsibility for his role in contributing to Eva’s tragic end.
Overall, Priestley uses Mr. Birling to highlight the prevailing attitudes towards women in the early 20th century, characterized by paternalism, disregard for women’s rights, and a focus on social status over individual well-being. Through Mr. Birling’s characterisation and interactions with female characters like Eva Smith, Priestley invites the audience to reflect on these attitudes and their implications for society.’
So this is just one example of how this particular question could be tackled.
Words that can help you with this question include terms such as:
- ‘Misogyny’ and ‘misogynistic’, the noun and adjective referring to the hatred of women. (Click here to read more about ‘Gender in ‘An Inspector Calls‘)
- ‘Patriarchal’, referring to a male dominated society. This word is actually used in the second sentence of this particular model answer.
- ‘Indifferent’, an adjective which can sometimes be either slightly negative or strongly negative. It can be used to someone not caring about something they should care about e.g. ‘Birling is in general indifferent to Eva’s plight or the plight of other working class women like her.’
- ‘Indifference’, the noun of indifferent.
- ‘Classist’, a form of prejudice or discriminatory attitude towards people based on class, usually of the richer classes to the poorer classes. Birling suffers from acute classism and this is one of the main themes on ‘An Inspector Calls’ (Click here to read more about ‘Classism in ‘An Inspector Calls‘)